User blog comment:Iloveme3380/jack and kim love story/@comment-5627269-20130119091039

I think that

you should organise the lines as a first

but to make the story longer u could have kim saying oh this is going to fast or something

later on she accepts

however when they are going out kim and jack are walking but then kim instantly gets hit by a car

when she comes back to the dojo at ther welcome party kim finds out that there is a new girl joining the dojo

but soon finds out that she is starting to take her place so kim quits etc.