Talk:Kick/@comment-5750239-20130227035951

hey guys! this is a poem i wrote today when I was feeling down maybe i can have your opinion?

Pain Like Rain:

Tick tock drip drop

Time ticks by like raindrops falling from a darkened sky

my heart pounds against my chest

Reminding me of every moment

Every worry, every tear, every pain

my heart searches for a hole

a glimmer of light

Something for me to wake up for every morn

Without the feeling of being forlorn

I want freedom, and happiness

In all this tradegy and madness

I imagine a light

shining bright, upon me

Giving me warmth and surrounding me with love

In a flash it vanishes

leaving me alone

once again on this darkened road

so?