Thread:Notired16/@comment-5758086-20121206011100/@comment-5750239-20121207030608

um try a cliff scene, something dramatic like, well depending who still needs to fall for the other

Like kim slips off the edge and jack has to pull her up then like they share a moment

or

where they fight ninjas and a bunch of booby traps at the opening of a cave leading to the treasure, they get past that and share a moment

either way then donna tobin shows up at the same place while they are on an adventure when they get back she tries to get jack but he has fallen too hard for kim

something like that?

do send me the link when this thing is finished