Talk:Kick/@comment-5750239-20130512205302

What do you guys think of this?

"Kim?" She turned to him, eyes wide.

"I have something I want to say." Eyes connected, both swimming with emotion. They stood there on the dojo mats, both wishing with all their hearts that some words would be said, and other words would remain unspoken.

"Yes, Jack?" I eyes seemed to connect in a way that they almost melted into one another. They stood there, breaths mixing, eyes watching, souls wanting as anticipation drifted into the room and dark fog rolled over the sun. The pair in the dojo, seemed no to notice as they were frozen, time passing so slow everything else disappeared.

"Kim.." The brunette pulled in a breath, as if these were his last moments. He turned away needing to collect himself. He was not used to being at a loss for words. Most times he could say what he meant without even thinking. But this was huge. Little words could change his life forever.

The blonde watched her best friend, wishing with her whole heart that he would not say the things she knew he would. She didn't want to do it, but she had to. Her heart trembled as he turned back, ready to face her.

"Kim, I- I want you to be my girlfriend." There it was. He said it. Forever was on the line. His job was done. Now it was her turn to make on break his heart. Their eyes connected. The nervous smile trcing lips fell as he saw her eyes. No-it couldn't be.

Her heart fell along with his. The words he had said should've made her happy beyond belief. But they broke her. Too many people. Too many times. She wanted him happy, she did. But she needed to know he was safe more. Yes may make them seem unbeatable, but the fear would chase them down. Every word destroyed her as she said them, but she couldn't destroy him.

"Jack, as much as I want to say yes, I can't." Tears slipped down her cheek as leaned up a placed a soft kiss on his cheek before walking out the door. The rain came down, drenching her as she walked down the street head down. She pulled her hood over her head as she turned the corner and disappeared.

He watched her. He knew she meant no. But why? She looked as sad about it as he was. Tear fell down his face as he dashed into the rain, heart broken. No more. He would not let life beat him this time. Water splashed under his shoes as the fog engulfed him. Erasing the good that had once been there.