Thread:Halia Stone/@comment-25478811-20150422064626

They were good storylines.The next best thing in first three chapters  were so intersting,actually that was very first Fanfiction i read and i was so blown away with dark aspects of storyline,you will never see jerry so depressing on actual tv show,i liked when Jack would go and kill people who disrespect and bully Jerry.But you should not Include a gay filter in this story because it is Bullshit.And you should not kill Kim and Milton.

Now about your Stir up Beast inside story,it was violent story and brutal specialy chapter 9,but again Gay filter in this story once agian takes away a lot,I DON T like gay people,those Gay people arent normal people,but back to story if we cut the gay scenes and predent that never ever were in story,you end up having a brutal-revenge type of a story,and that same goes for the next best thing. 4.5 out of 5 stars,this rating is for a both storys and does not include any of a Gay Bullshit. 