Talk:Kick/@comment-123.166.58.152-20120804003625/@comment-5162206-20120804064643

well even though I'm not a good writer, I read a lot. and I noticed the fanfic with a lot of reviews isn't like "oh I think it's alot like OO" they have original stories.

for example "playing to win". the story isn't based of any movie or book (that's what I think...) and (most of) the story finishes in a cliff hanger.

and very cute Kick moments ;)

I hoped that helped. good luck on your fanfic :D