Thread:Notired16/@comment-5758086-20121206011100/@comment-5750239-20121219231126

I'll try to fit in your ideas and thanks

20 minutes later...

Pilot: this is you pilot speaking. We're in a very bad situation so we will be landing as soon as possible. Do not panic, but if we don't land now we'll surely crash

Eddie: NO!!!!! I MUST save my juice boxes. *he takes them from up top and holds them close to him


 * kim had fallen asleep again

Jack: Kim, wake up. com'on wake up!


 * the plane suddenly jerks violently and the luggage slides everywhere


 * Kim starts to wake up

Kim: what's going on?

Jack: We're gon--- '''KIM! *'''a suitcase falls off the shelf knocking Kim out

Jack: *on the verge of tears

Kim wake up! Please don't leave me! Wake Up!


 * there's no response

Jack: MILTON! Get over here!


 * Milton scrambles to Jack,  meanwhile the pilots are thying to land the plane

Milton: *checks Kim over, finds she isn't breathing

Jack, kim's not breathing

Jack: What do we do?

Milton: You know CPR right?

Jack: Yeah, my grandfather taught it to me

Milton: Do it now!

Jack: okay! *begins with the chest compressions and does all thirty then pauses before breathing in her mouth. takes a deep breath and slowly put his lips to hers knowing that this may not only be the only time his does this but also the most important. He pulls back and takes another breath  he puts his lips to hers again and this time kim begins to respond

Kim: jack? *she says this weakly slowly opening her eyes

Jack: I'm here kim *she then hugs him

Kim: thank you for saving me

Jack: no problem *the people begin to cheer, not only because he saved her but because the plane had landed, they were still in the middle of nowhere though

It's really long I know, we should wait awhile til they actually kiss