Talk:Kick/@comment-5624832-20130201053408/@comment-74.61.147.82-20130201133617

I liked it, It was really great to read. The first paragraph was a little comfusing. About Brett picking her up. Was he going to bring her to the restraunt? Then was he late so then he told her to ride a bus and meet him there. Other than that I really liked it. Your freinds a good writer.