Talk:Kick/@comment-11515251-20130719151203

Kickin it Fanfic! Revenge on the Jerk! (First part)

Jack, Rudy, Milton and Jerry are in the dojo for a tournament

Rudy: where is Kim!? The tournament is about to start!

Jack sees Kim outside the door but doesn't tell Rudy

Jack: um...I'll go look for her (Jack walks out, over to Kim)

Kim: hey, sorry I'm late, Jack (smiles)

Jack: it's ok, but I was worried about u...

Kim: (smiles) I'll be cheering for u the whole time!

Jack: thanks Kim! Ur The best...(smiles)

Kim: (holds Jack's hand) I bet Rudy freaking out, we'd better hurry, (giggles)

Jack and Kim walk into the dojo

Rudy: good ur here, Jerry's up next!

Jack and Kim sit beside each other on the bench

Jerry wins the match, then sits on the bench

Rudy: Milton, ur up against a black dragon, can u handle it?

Milton: probably not...

Rudy: well, then...(thinks) um...do ur best! (Enthusiastic thumbs up)

Jack and Kim are talking to each other

Jack: also, Kim, I'm kind of worried

Kim: why, ur the best student in the dojo (smiles)

Jack: I'm up against Donny Michaels (points at a karate student)

Kim: Jack, if u win or lose, ur still the best, u'll always be number 1 for me! (Smiles then bites lip)

Jack: thanks Kim, u always know how to cheer me up! (Smiles)

Milton walks back to the bench with a wedgie

Rudy: Kim, ready?

Kim: ya Rudy, one sec, (whispers to Jack) wish me luck! (Smiles)

Kim stands on the mat, ready to fight

Jack: Go Kim!

Kim smiles at Jack, then starts to fight her opponent

Kim wins the match then goes back to Jack

Kim: are u ready Jack!? (Smiles)

Jack: yup, (gets up, then smiles at Kim)

Jack steps onto the mat

Donny: I'm gonna brake ur face and enjoy it!

Jacks looks at Kim, Kim smiles at him

Jack begins fighting Donny

Kim: go Jack! Ur the best!

Rudy: come on, Jack! U can do it!

Jerry and Milton: Jack!

Jack throws a punch at Donny, Donny ducks, grabs Jack's arm, flips him then pulls his arm backwards

Donny gets up, the ref holds up his hand

Ref: the winner is Donny!

Jack is still on the mat, Kim runs over to him

Kim: Jack! Jack, what's wrong!? Jack!

Jack: Kim, I think my arm is broken...(whimpering)

Kim: Rudy! Come quick!

Rudy runs over to Jack and Kim

Rudy: what happened!?

Kim: Jack's arm is broken!

Rudy: Jack? Are u ok?

Jack: my arm really hurts!

Kim: Rudy, we need to do something!

Rudy: ok, Kim take Jack to my car, I'll take him to the hospital!

Kim: ok, Rudy, but I'm coming!

Kim helps Jack up, and walks him out

Jerry and Milton: we'll come too!

Jerry and Milton follow Kim

Jack is in a hospital room, Jerry and Milton enter the room

Jerry: how are u feeling, man?

Jack: my arm still really hurts...

Milton: did they give u anything for it?

Jack: they put a cast on it...but guys that's not important right now...

Milton: what do u mean it's not important!? U just broke ur arm!

Jack: I'm worried about Kim! She sounded really scared when I fell, I don't want her to worry!

Jerry: she cares about u, dude!

Jack: I just don't want her to get hurt like I did!

Kim walks into the room

Kim: uh, guys can I speak to Jack alone...

Milton: sure!

Jerry and Milton leave the room

Jack: hey Kim!

Kim: hey, Jack are u ok?

Jack: I'm fine but...I want to give u something...

Jack reaches into his pocket and takes out a bracelet that says " I <3 U" and hands it to Kim

Jack: I wanted to give it to u after the tournament but...

Kim: thanks Jack, it beautiful, I love it (smiles then gives Jack a hug)

Jack smiles

Kim: so how is ur arm now? (Looks worried)

Jack: it hurts but ur smile makes me feel better (giggles)

Kim giggles then smiles

Jerry and Milton are in the lobby with Rudy, Rudy is playing checkers with an old guy

Jerry: hey Rudy, what are u doing!?

Rudy: I playing something this old geezer (points at old man) calls Checkers!

Milton: do u even know how to play checkers!?

Rudy: pffft...ya...Nope, not at all! So anyway how is Jack?

Jerry: he said his arm really hurts so they gave him a cast

Milton: ya, poor guy!

Rudy: so what's he doing now? Did u leave him alone!?

Jerry: no, he's talking to Kim!

Rudy: oh, ok, so wanna play some checkers!?

Milton: sure, I am a champion!

Rudy and Milton play checkers

Milton loses

Jerry: sure...a champion...at what?-losing!?

Milton: hey, wait a second, I'm missing a piece!

Milton looks for the piece

Milton: found it!

Milton and Rudy play again

Rudy loses

Milton: see I am the champion!

Jerry: dude, checkers is stupid!

Milton: huh! Never say those words again! U don't even know how to play!

Jerry: I don't need to know! Come one, lets play!

Jerry and Milton play checkers

Jerry wins

Jerry: told u!

(There's more)