Thread:KickAusllyFAN/@comment-11515251-20130719194821

Kickin it Fanfic! Revenge on the Jerk!

Jack, Rudy, Milton and Jerry are in the dojo for a tournament

Rudy: where is Kim!? The tournament is about to start!

Jack sees Kim outside the door but doesn't tell Rudy

Jack: um...I'll go look for her (Jack walks out, over to Kim)

Kim: hey, sorry I'm late, Jack (smiles)

Jack: it's ok, but I was worried about u...

Kim: (smiles) I'll be cheering for u the whole time!

Jack: thanks Kim! Ur The best...(smiles)

Kim: (holds Jack's hand) I bet Rudy freaking out, we'd better hurry, (giggles)

Jack and Kim walk into the dojo

Rudy: good ur here, Jerry's up next!

Jack and Kim sit beside each other on the bench

Jerry wins the match, then sits on the bench

Rudy: Milton, ur up against a black dragon, can u handle it?

Milton: probably not...

Rudy: well, then...(thinks) um...do ur best! (Enthusiastic thumbs up)

Jack and Kim are talking to each other

Jack: also, Kim, I'm kind of worried

Kim: why, ur the best student in the dojo (smiles)

Jack: I'm up against Donny Michaels (points at a karate student)

Kim: Jack, if u win or lose, ur still the best, u'll always be number 1 for me! (Smiles then bites lip)

Jack: thanks Kim, u always know how to cheer me up! (Smiles)

Milton walks back to the bench with a wedgie

Rudy: Kim, ready?

Kim: ya Rudy, one sec, (whispers to Jack) wish me luck! (Smiles)

Kim stands on the mat, ready to fight

Jack: Go Kim!

Kim smiles at Jack, then starts to fight her opponent

Kim wins the match then goes back to Jack

Kim: are u ready Jack!? (Smiles)

Jack: yup, (gets up, then smiles at Kim)

Jack steps onto the mat

Donny: I'm gonna brake ur face and enjoy it!

Jacks looks at Kim, Kim smiles at him

Jack begins fighting Donny

Kim: go Jack! Ur the best!

Rudy: come on, Jack! U can do it!

Jerry and Milton: Jack!

Jack throws a punch at Donny, Donny ducks, grabs Jack's arm, flips him then pulls his arm backwards

Donny gets up, the ref holds up his hand

Ref: the winner is Donny!

Jack is still on the mat, Kim runs over to him

Kim: Jack! Jack, what's wrong!? Jack!

Jack: Kim, I think my arm is broken...(whimpering)

Kim: Rudy! Come quick!

Rudy runs over to Jack and Kim

Rudy: what happened!?

Kim: Jack's arm is broken!

Rudy: Jack? Are u ok?

Jack: my arm really hurts!

Kim: Rudy, we need to do something!

Rudy: ok, Kim take Jack to my car, I'll take him to the hospital!

Kim: ok, Rudy, but I'm coming!

Kim helps Jack up, and walks him out

Jerry and Milton: we'll come too!

Jerry and Milton follow Kim

Jack is in a hospital room, Jerry and Milton enter the room

Jerry: how are u feeling, man?

Jack: my arm still really hurts...

Milton: did they give u anything for it?

Jack: they put a cast on it...but guys that's not important right now...

Milton: what do u mean it's not important!? U just broke ur arm!

Jack: I'm worried about Kim! She sounded really scared when I fell, I don't want her to worry!

Jerry: she cares about u, dude!

Jack: I just don't want her to get hurt like I did!

Kim walks into the room

Kim: uh, guys can I speak to Jack alone...

Milton: sure!

Jerry and Milton leave the room

Jack: hey Kim!

Kim: hey, Jack are u ok?

Jack: I'm fine but...I want to give u something...

Jack reaches into his pocket and takes out a bracelet that says " I <3 U" and hands it to Kim

Jack: I wanted to give it to u after the tournament but...

Kim: thanks Jack, it beautiful, I love it (smiles then gives Jack a hug)

Jack smiles

Kim: so how is ur arm now? (Looks worried)

Jack: it hurts but ur smile makes me feel better (giggles)

Kim giggles then smiles

Jerry and Milton are in the lobby with Rudy, Rudy is playing checkers with an old guy

Jerry: hey Rudy, what are u doing!?

Rudy: I playing something this old geezer (points at old man) calls Checkers!

Milton: do u even know how to play checkers!?

Rudy: pffft...ya...Nope, not at all! So anyway how is Jack?

Jerry: he said his arm really hurts so they gave him a cast

Milton: ya, poor guy!

Rudy: so what's he doing now? Did u leave him alone!?

Jerry: no, he's talking to Kim!

Rudy: oh, ok, so wanna play some checkers!?

Milton: sure, I am a champion!

Rudy and Milton play checkers

Milton loses

Jerry: sure...a champion...at what?-losing!?

Milton: hey, wait a second, I'm missing a piece!

Milton looks for the piece

Milton: found it!

Milton and Rudy play again

Rudy loses

Milton: see I am the champion!

Jerry: dude, checkers is stupid!

Milton: huh! Never say those words again! U don't even know how to play!

Jerry: I don't need to know! Come one, lets play!

Jerry and Milton play checkers

Jerry wins

Jerry: told u!

Jack and Kim are in Jack's hospital room

Jack: thanks for staying with me Kim!

Kim: I'll always be here for u, Jack!

Jack kiss Kim on the cheek

Kim bites her lip

Jack: I can't believe I lost the tournament for us!

Kim: Jack we don't care about the tournament, we care about u! (Smiles)

Kim: and ur a way better fighter than Donny, he's just a jerk!

Jack: u always manage to cheer me up, thanks Kim! Ur the best! (Jack gives Kim a hug)

The next day, Jerry, Milton and Rudy are at the courtyard

Rudy: we should have "checkers" matches here!

Jerry: nah! Checkers is lame!

Milton: come on, it'll be fun!

Jerry: No!

Milton: u'll meet girls!

Jerry: I'm in!

Jerry and Milton are playing against old men

Jerry and Milton win!

A chess players comes by and sits near them (little boy)

Rudy: go away! No chess players! Or should I say no chess losers!

The chess player runs away scared

Kim visits Jack at the hospital

Kim: hey, Jack! (Smiles) area feeling any better?

Jack: not really, but I'll be okay...Now that ur hear!

Kim: (smiles) so did the doctor tell u anything about ur arm?

Jack: ya, he said it should be better in about 2 weeks, it wasn't too broken, (smiles) u dont need to worry about me, Kim, I'm fine!

Kim: Jack, ur the greatest guy I know, u don't have to be brave all the time...

Jack: I know but I'm ok, really! (Smiles)

Kim smiles then kisses Jack's cheek

Jack giggles

Jack: the doctor said I can go back home today (smiles)

Kim: that's great! (Smiles)

Jack: so are we still on for our date tomorrow!?

Kim: jack, ur arm is in a cast, are u sure u still wanna go!?

Jack: of course! I'm not gonna cancel a date cause of that, especially when I'm going with u! (Smiles)

Kim: even when ur arm is broken u can still be the sweetest guy in the world! (Smiles)

Kim: I'll go get u some water...(walks out)

Donny enters the room

Donny: hey Jack, I'm not finished with u!

Jack: Donny stop being a jerk and get out!

Donny: not gonna happen! (Hits Jack's broken arm)

Donny walks out of the room

Kim walks into the room and sees Jack in pain

Kim: Jack! What happened!?

Jack: nothing Kim, I'm fine...(lie-ing)

Kim sees Donny outside the room, laughing at Jack

Kim: that's it, that jerk is gonna get it!

Jack and Kim are at the courtyard

Jack: ready for our date!?

Kim: I need to do something first! Follow me!

Jack and Kim are at Donny's dojo

Donny: what are u losers doing here!?

Kim: Donny, I won't let u hurt Jack!

Donny: what are u gonna do about it!?

Kim: I'm gonna defeat u!

Donny: I'll brake u, just like I broke ur boyfriend over there! (Points at Jack)

Jack: that's it! (Tries to attack Donny)

Kim holds Jack back (like he does for her)

Kim fights Donny and wins

Kim and Jack walk out of the dojo

Jack: I can't believe u fought him for me!

Kim: Jack, I would do anything for u, because...I love u!

Jack smiles, then hugs Kim, they stare into each others eyes

Jack kisses Kim

Jack: I love u too!

Jerry, Milton, Rudy, Kim and Jack are at the courtyard

Kim: what are u guys doing!?

Rudy: playing checkers!

Jack: checkers is lame!

Jerry: Milton said checkers would get me girls!

Milton: here they come!

Jerry: whoa!

A bunch of nerdy girls surround Jerry

Jerry: Milton!

Milton: at least I got u girls!

The end!

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