Talk:Kick/@comment-9713457-20121228224216

''"Hurry!" We ran into the shoe store, then quietly closed the door "Kim this place isn't creepy!......Just girly" I rolled my eyes. "That's because you haven't seen behind the shelves" I walked to the back of the store, where it was mainly messy. I walked back to the shopping area and went through the small space in between the shelves. We saw the place with the spider webs and the creepy ladder. The pathway was skinny so we could only walk through in a line. I started to walk down the hallway "Okay! Come on guys!" Silence. "Guys!" I turned around and saw the scariest thing ever "Going somewhere?" I walked back slowly, but a wall got in my way "AHHHH!"''

A start to my first FF, after this it says 3 Days Later. That was just like a preview. Anyway, what do you think?