Thread:KickAusllyFAN/@comment-11515251-20130721024610

Kickin it fanfic! Surprise Date!

Note: this fanfic was written after my others but comes before them!

Jack and Milton are in the dojo, sitting on the bench

Milton: so, what are u doing tomorrow, Jack!?

Jack: I'm planning a surprise date with Kim! (Smiles)

Milton: surprise? So ur not gonna tell her? Why?

Jack: cause...I want us to have our first kiss on the date!

Milton: awe! I won't say a word about it!

Jack: good, I don't want her to know, now come on, it's time for ur lesson!

Milton and Jack step onto the mat

Jack holds up some kick pads

Jack: ready?

Milton: yup-

Jack: right! (Milton kicks right) left! (Milton kicks left)

Milton: hey, I'm getting better! (Smiles with satisfaction)

Jack: left...left! Milton! Left!

Milton kicks right and slips

Rudy walks in from the locker room, then stares at Milton on the ground

Rudy: Milton...again!

Jack: yup...again!

Rudy: u need to focus! Concentrate! Watch, Jack, hold'em up!

Jack: ready!

Rudy: ya, let's go!

Jack: left! (Rudy kicks left) left! (Rudy kicks left) right! (Rudy kicks right)

Rudy: see Milton, now that's how to do it! (Smiles)

Jack: left! Left! Rudy!

Rudy: huh...(Rudy kicks right, then slips)

Milton: Rudy! U need to focus! (Laughs at Rudy)

Jack giggles

Kim is at the courtyard, Jack walks over to her

Kim: hey Jack! (Smiles)

Jack: hey Kim

Kim: so, how was practise?

Jack: well, Milton fell down, Rudy tried to teach him something then fell down too! Same old, same old (smiles and giggles)

Kim giggles

Jack and Kim sit down and talk

Kim: I really like spending time with u, Jack!

Jack: me too, I feel like I can tell u anything! (Smiles)

Kim bites her lip

Jerry, Milton and Rudy are in the dojo

Bobby walks into the dojo

Rudy: hey, Bobby!

Milton and Jerry are using bow staffs, Jerry moves his near Milton's foot causing Milton to slip

Bobby: hello Rudy!

Milton: owe! Jerry be careful!

Jerry: it wasn't me, (keeps using his bow staff, then trips on it) owe!

Bobby: Rudy! These boys know nothing about karate!

Jerry and Milton: hey!

Rudy: but I've been training them for years!

Bobby: well then u are not fit to teach them!

Rudy gasps

Bobby: I will teach them!

Rudy: what!? No!

Milton: I wanna train with Bobby!

Rudy: fine! Then Jerry (looks at Jerry) ur sticking with me!

Jerry: ok, do u want some glue or tape?

Bobby: well...good luck with that!

Bobby and Milton leave

Kim enters the dojo (alone) then opens her locker

A note falls out, Kim picks it up, then reads it

Kim: meet me at the courtyard tomorrow at 7:30 (pm)

Kim: ok...that was weird...

Kim moves a dummy onto the mat and starts practice

Jack walks in

Jack: hey Kim! (Smiles)

Kim: hey Jack (kicks the dummy's head) wanna practice with me? (Smiles)

Jack: sure! (Smiles back)

Jack steps onto the mat

Kim: something weird just happened, there was a note in my locker, it said to be at the courtyard tomorrow at 7:30

Jack smiles but stops so Kim wouldn't see him

Jack: oh, I wonder who put it there...

Jack spins in the air then kicks the dummy's head, it falls over

Kim: wow, that was great Jack!

Jack: thanks, from u that means a lot!

They both smile

Kim: I'm gonna go grab a towel, Kim walks into the changing room

Jack runs to the door and sticks a piece of paper on it

Kim walks back in

Kim: so Jack can u teach me that move?

Jack: Of course!

Jack demonstrates the move, then holds Kim and shows her how to do the move

Jack: now u try! (Smiles)

Kim does the move

Kim: thanks Jack! (gives Jack a hug)

They smile at each other

Jack: wanna go get something to eat?

Kim: sure!

They walk over to the door, Kim stops and looks at the paper

Kim: (reading the paper) get ready for something special, u'll never forget!

Kim: that is really weird!

Jack: (smiles) hmmm...I wonder what it means...

Kim: well, should I go?

Jack: maybe it's important...(smiles)

Milton is at Bobby's house with Bobby

Bobby: I will train u better than Rudy has ever trained anyone!

Milton: but Rudy trained Jack-

Bobby: never mind that! The point is...u will be able to defeat Jerry!

Milton: ok...so, when do we start?

Bobby: right now- (looks at tv) in a few hours!

Rudy and Jerry are in the dojo

Rudy: u need to destroy Milton!

Jerry: why?

Rudy: because I am better than Bobby!

Jerry: what does that have to do with me!?

Rudy: (angry tone) just do it because I said so!

Rudy starts training Jerry, then some girls pass by the dojo

Jerry: well, see ya!

Rudy: hey! come back here! (Sees a lady, then thinks) well, see ya!

The next day, Jack is at the courtyard

Jack places a piece of paper on a table, then hides

Kim walks onto the courtyard, over to the table, then reads the paper

Kim: turn around...

Jack stands behind her

Kim: huh? (Turns around, sees Jack)

Jack: ready for our date? (Smiles)

Kim smiles then hugs Jack

Kim: (surprised) what date? (Smiles)

Jack: u'll see! (Smiles)

Jack holds Kim's hand then they walk off

Jack and Kim are at a park, having a picnic

Jack: are u enjoying the picnic? (Smiles)

Kim: it's amazing, thanks so much, Jack!

Jack: ur welcome, I just wanted to make u happy!

Kim: Jack, ur amazing, I'm always happy when I'm with u!

Kim hugs Jack

Rudy and Jerry are in the dojo

Bobby and Milton enter

Bobby: ready Rudy?

Rudy: the question is are u...ready?

Bobby: yes...

Rudy: oh...well, then...we are too!

Jerry and Milton step onto the mat

They start to fight, in a girly way, then both fall over

Rudy: stop! Stop! Stop! Have we taught u nothing!?

Jerry and Milton: ya!

Milton: all we did was watch tv!

Jerry: and all we did was chase after girls!

Bobby: fine! Then Rudy and I will fight!

Bobby and Rudy step onto the mat

They start fighting

Bobby kicks Rudy while Rudy kicks Bobby, they both fall over

Kim and Jack are still at the park

Kim: Jack, this date is...perfect (smiles)

Jack: not yet...(smiles and takes out a flower)

Jack hands the flower to Kim

Kim: it's beautiful (smiles)

A butterfly lands on the flower, Jack and Kim stare at it

They look into each others eyes, then Kiss

Kim: u were right, this is something special that I will never forget! (Smiles then bites her lip)

(Later) Jack and Kim walk onto the courtyard

Kim: I had so much fun, thanks Jack! But why didn't u just ask me on a date?

Jack: because...I wanted us to have our first kiss and I wanted to make it very special! (Smiles)

Kim: it was! (Smiles back)

Jack and Kim hear yelling from the dojo, then run inside

Jack: what are u guys doing!?

Bobby: we are trying to figure out who is better! And it's obviously me!

Rudy yells at Bobby again

Kim: uh, Jack and I can beat u both!

Bobby: oh ya!?

Rudy: bring it!

The four of them walk onto the mat

Jack and Kim work together to bring down Bobby and Rudy

Jack and Kim high five each other, then giggle and smile

The End!

So, what do u think!? 