Talk:Kick/@comment-11515251-20130721023729

Kickin it fanfic! Surprise Date! (First part)

Note: this fanfic was written after my others but comes before them!

Jack and Milton are in the dojo, sitting on the bench

Milton: so, what are u doing tomorrow, Jack!?

Jack: I'm planning a surprise date with Kim! (Smiles)

Milton: surprise? So ur not gonna tell her? Why?

Jack: cause...I want us to have our first kiss on the date!

Milton: awe! I won't say a word about it!

Jack: good, I don't want her to know, now come on, it's time for ur lesson!

Milton and Jack step onto the mat

Jack holds up some kick pads

Jack: ready?

Milton: yup-

Jack: right! (Milton kicks right) left! (Milton kicks left)

Milton: hey, I'm getting better! (Smiles with satisfaction)

Jack: left...left! Milton! Left!

Milton kicks right and slips

Rudy walks in from the locker room, then stares at Milton on the ground

Rudy: Milton...again!

Jack: yup...again!

Rudy: u need to focus! Concentrate! Watch, Jack, hold'em up!

Jack: ready!

Rudy: ya, let's go!

Jack: left! (Rudy kicks left) left! (Rudy kicks left) right! (Rudy kicks right)

Rudy: see Milton, now that's how to do it! (Smiles)

Jack: left! Left! Rudy!

Rudy: huh...(Rudy kicks right, then slips)

Milton: Rudy! U need to focus! (Laughs at Rudy)

Jack giggles

Kim is at the courtyard, Jack walks over to her

Kim: hey Jack! (Smiles)

Jack: hey Kim

Kim: so, how was practise?

Jack: well, Milton fell down, Rudy tried to teach him something then fell down too! Same old, same old (smiles and giggles)

Kim giggles

Jack and Kim sit down and talk

Kim: I really like spending time with u, Jack!

Jack: me too, I feel like I can tell u anything! (Smiles)

Kim bites her lip

Jerry, Milton and Rudy are in the dojo

Bobby walks into the dojo

Rudy: hey, Bobby!

Milton and Jerry are using bow staffs, Jerry moves his near Milton's foot causing Milton to slip

Bobby: hello Rudy!

Milton: owe! Jerry be careful!

Jerry: it wasn't me, (keeps using his bow staff, then trips on it) owe!

Bobby: Rudy! These boys know nothing about karate!

Jerry and Milton: hey!

Rudy: but I've been training them for years!

Bobby: well then u are not fit to teach them!

Rudy gasps

Bobby: I will teach them!

Rudy: what!? No!

Milton: I wanna train with Bobby!

Rudy: fine! Then Jerry (looks at Jerry) ur sticking with me!

Jerry: ok, do u want some glue or tape?

Bobby: well...good luck with that!

Bobby and Milton leave

Kim enters the dojo (alone) then opens her locker

A note falls out, Kim picks it up, then reads it

Kim: meet me at the courtyard tomorrow at 7:30 (pm)

Kim: ok...that was weird...

Kim moves a dummy onto the mat and starts practice

Jack walks in

Jack: hey Kim! (Smiles)

Kim: hey Jack (kicks the dummy's head) wanna practice with me? (Smiles)

Jack: sure! (Smiles back)

Jack steps onto the mat

Kim: something weird just happened, there was a note in my locker, it said to be at the courtyard tomorrow at 7:30

Jack smiles but stops so Kim wouldn't see him

Jack: oh, I wonder who put it there...

Jack spins in the air then kicks the dummy's head, it falls over

Kim: wow, that was great Jack!

Jack: thanks, from u that means a lot!

They both smile

Kim: I'm gonna go grab a towel, Kim walks into the changing room

Jack runs to the door and sticks a piece of paper on it

Kim walks back in

Kim: so Jack can u teach me that move?

Jack: Of course!

Jack demonstrates the move, then holds Kim and shows her how to do the move

Jack: now u try! (Smiles)

Kim does the move

Kim: thanks Jack! (gives Jack a hug)

They smile at each other

Jack: wanna go get something to eat?

Kim: sure!

They walk over to the door, Kim stops and looks at the paper

Kim: (reading the paper) get ready for something special, u'll never forget!

Kim: that is really weird!

Jack: (smiles) hmmm...I wonder what it means...

Kim: well, should I go?

Jack: maybe it's important...(smiles)

Milton is at Bobby's house with Bobby

Bobby: I will train u better than Rudy has ever trained anyone!

Milton: but Rudy trained Jack-

Bobby: never mind that! The point is...u will be able to defeat Jerry!

Milton: ok...so, when do we start?

Bobby: right now- (looks at tv) in a few hours!

Rudy and Jerry are in the dojo

Rudy: u need to destroy Milton!

Jerry: why?

Rudy: because I am better than Bobby!

Jerry: what does that have to do with me!?

Rudy: (angry tone) just do it because I said so!

Rudy starts training Jerry, then some girls pass by the dojo

Jerry: well, see ya!

Rudy: hey! come back here! (Sees a lady, then thinks) well, see ya!