User blog comment:Kick Luv/Me Without You One-Shot/@comment-68.51.103.39-20121028192101

TOO MUSHY! First iff Kim is NOT insecure about herself like that and neither is Jack so the storyline seems too "cliche". The idea is pretty good but it's just too sappy. Also Kim and Jack are only 15 years old, their date/conversation is too grown for 15 year olds to think/talk.