User blog:IAmJenna/Birthday-chapter1

Ok, I know that this title is really bad but please comment on my writing. So, here goes my first fanfic!!! And I know that Jack's/Leo's Birthday is in the summer and that this idea is somewhat stupid, but still, this was the best idea I had.

Chapter1

(At the dojo, Jack, Kim, Jerry, Milton are talking)

jack: Hey, guys! My birthday is coming up!!!

jerry: When is it?

jack: tomorrow!

kim, jerry, milton: WHAT!!!!!!!!!

(rrrrrr, rrrrrr)

jack:Oh, it's my mom. gotta go. see ya later!

(jack goes out)

milton: OMG!!! what are we gonna do!!!!!!

kim: throw a surprise birthday party for jack.

jerry: huh??????

(they huddle up and whisper to each other)

The next day at school

kim: jack! rudy says that tomorrow's practice is going to be at 6 p.m. he says that he has a lot of things to do.

jack: ok. (thinking: did they forget that today is my birthday? they wouldn't have. they're my best friends)

jerry: hey, jack! mika says that the falafels are half price today. wanna go and get some before practice?

jack: uh, no... (okay, they must have forgotten the fact that today is my b-day)

milton: i'm going.

kim: me, too. jack, are you sure you're not going?

jack: yessss, i am soooooo sure. (I trusted them to remember!!)

Would Jack notice about the birthday party? What will the gang's surprise birthday party for Jack be?