Talk:Jack Stands Alone/@comment-96.247.202.210-20130618212151

i know the episode doesn't start till next week but just to get you guys interested i decided to write you guys a story and i did this for you guys and i dont want you guys bored

Jack's new experience

this story is like a combination of hit the road jack,safe haven,the proposal(very funny movie) and a little bit of my imagination except it has a little comedy and TONS OF KICK MOMENT.hoped you like it especially the kick shippers.:)

Rudy-guys guys guys BIG news!!!!!

Milton-what is it?

Rudy-I got the new smooth/sharp shaving cream ON SALE!!!

Kim-do you need to shave your legs? cuz they are pretty hairy

Rudy-no kim that's not it

Jack-chest?

Rudy-nope

Kim-back?

Rudy-nope

Jack-your face?

Rudy-nope and hey

Jerry-then what do you need it for?

Rudy-there are lots of things yoi don't know about me

rudy walks towards his office and jack follows him

Jack- hey rudy i know how much you love nature so I was wondering if you want to go canoeing with me just you and I

Rudy-where are you gonna find a canoe?

Jack-oh actually my dad bought one few days ago and he wants me to bring a friend cause it can only hold two people

Rudy-whe is it?

Jack- later

Rudy-I wish I can but I can't cuz I have a doctors appointment

Jack- what's wrong with you? you look fine to me

Rudy-it looks like im healthy but everytime I sit down it makes this weird sound like im.......

Jack-ok I got it but im bummed you can't come

Rudy-try asking someone else?

jack nods and exits rudy's office and went to ask jerry

Jack-hey jerry do you want to go canoeing.....

Jerry-AHHHHH" he faints into the mat

jack helps jerry up

Jack-are you ok?

Jerry-don't ever say that C word

Jack-why?

Jerry-few years ago when I was 12 I was fishing in a canoe with my grandpa. I caught a tuna and he caught a sword fish everything was fine until it tipped over and my grandpa fell into the water and sank into the ocean. no one found him since

Jack-oh I didn't know but im sorry for you lost. so your not going on a boat ride with me just you and I?

Jerry-nope

Jack-ok then

jack walks toward milton while he exits out from the restroom

Jack-uh milton can I ask you something?

Milton-of course you can. you can tell me anything

Jack-ok then are you busy today?

Milton-(gives a troublesome face) ew today after karate practice I have to work on a project with julie.sorry and what were you going to ask anyway

Jack-oh I was wondering if you want to go canoeing with me just you and I but I understand

milton smiles at jack and he returns with a smile back too and walks towards kim

Jack-hey kim

Kim-oh hey jack

Jack-kim can I ask you something?

Kim- sure

Jack- are you busy today?

Kim-well after karate practice I have nothing to do.....

Jack-great cuz I was wondering if you want to go on a canoe trip with me?

Kim- is the guys gonna come too :)

Jack-nope ( smiles at kim)

Kim- why not ( happy/comfused face)?

Jack-cuz I already asked them " rudy has a doctors appointment,jerry is afraid of canoes, and milton has to doa project with julie and also the canoe can only hold two people

Kim-ok then and I would love to come (she smiles at jack and he smiles back)

after 4 hous of practice they meet at a dock

jack is holding the canoe and kim is holding the paddles

Jack-so are you ready?

Kim-yeah let's go in

jack helps kim get in the canoe and he follows her in

Kim- jack it's very nice of your dad to lent youthis canoe

Jack-I know ( kim smirks)

jack and kim are paddling

Kim- jack are you sure we are heading the right direction

Jack-yes kim i'm pretty sure we are cuz I have the map and it says go....

Kim-( cuts jack off) LOOK!!!!

jack turns around and he sees rocky ponts and on the other side is a huge waterfall

Jack-well then this map is a total frod (throws away the map into the river)

Kim- yeah your right but we also have a choice

Jack-what do you mean?

Kim-well we can't turn around cuz the stream is pushing us this direction so either big drop or rocky road

Jack-well... I think we should go to rocky road

Kim-I don't know jack ( has a worry face)

Jack- kim did I ever let you down?

Kim-no

Jack-do you trust me at least?

Kim- yes I trust you

jack and kim turn to the rocky stream and got dunked,splashed,and knocked out until the canoe floats to this calm lake where it has leafs on the water and trees everywhere

jack and kim wakes up

Kim- jack

Jack- yeah kim

Kim- where are we

Jack-I don't know but I guess we don't need are paddles

Kim-well this is a pretty sight to be

Jack-yeah it is

they smile at each other

Kim-this is really nice and the rocky road was fun

Jack- I had fun with you

kim blushes at jack and the sun shines behind her making kim glistens and jack stares at her

Kim-jack

Jack-kim

Kim- do you hear that?

it starts to thunder

Jack-yeah it's just a small thunder storm no worries

1 min later it rains hard and jack and kim are pulling the canoe on land where all the trees are

Kim-( laughing) THIS IS CRAZY!!!

Jack-(laughing) IT IS!!!!

Kim-(laughing) WHERE DID IT COME FROM?!!!

Jack-(laughing)I DON'T KNOW BUT I DID UNDERESTIMATED THE STROM!!!!!

while they are laughing thunder comes again

Kim-(laughing) WHOA

Jack-(laughing) WE SHOULD PROBALY GET OUT OF HERE

jack held out his hand to kim and she takes it and they run together while laughing. after 15 sec of running jack picks up kim by the legs while running and laughing. after another 15 sec of carrying kim he puts her down

Jack-man when is the ran gonna stop

Kim- I don't know but I don't want it to stop

Jack-hey kim can I ask you something since it is perfect weather outside :)

Kim- ( chuckles) sure

Jack-do you want to dance with me?

Kim-sure( she bites her bottom lip)

they start to slow dance like they did in spyfall whie laughing

the next day jack is walking arounf the mall and starts to have flash backs with kim and him

then jack walks into the dojo to meet with rudy,milton, and jerry

Rudy-hey jack

Jack-oh hey rudy

Rudy-how was your canoe trip?

Jack-I had loads of fun

Milton-who did you go with?

Jack-kim

Jerry-where di you guys go?

Jack- at river next to the mall

Rudy-ok well.... lets get to work milton spar with jack

Milton-fine go ahead jack fli me like you mean it

Jack-( starts to have flashbacks from kim of kong when they saprred in the begiing and the end. then he shakes his head) i'm not gonna flip you

Milton-pound me?

Jack-no and I will never pound you

Milton-then what are you gonna do then?

Jack- nothing cuz i'm not gonna spar with you

jack exits the dojo and goes to falafal phils

Milton-whoa what was that

Jerry- I don't know but milton you won!

Milton jerry I did not win he bailed me out

Milton- ( takes a deep breath) rudy do you think we should get jack back

Rudy- nah don't worry he will come back maybe he needs to clear out some things from his chest

meanwhile with jack at falafal phils

Jack-phil can I talk to you

Phil- not now I have customers

Jack-phil i'm your only customer here

Phil- (pauses for 3 sec) ok what do you need

Jack- did you ever have a crush that is so strong you can't let it out?

Phil-oh I see how it is you like someone

Jack- yes phil I like someone

Phil-well who is this special girl?

Jack-well you should know who it is

Phil- I don't know this girl ( looks confused)

Jack-she is the girl that I always hang out here

Phil-hmmmm?

Jack-you know what phil i'm just gonna go home cuz im late for dinner

Phil- ok have a good day

jack waves goodbye and heads home

jack sees his dad on his porch and sits next to him

Jack-hey dad

Jack's dad-hey

Jack-can I tell you something?

Jack's dad- you can tell me anything

Jack- do you remeber that promise I made when I was 5?

Jack's dad-the one that you will never fall in love with a girl?

Jack- yeah that one

Jack's dad-well what about it?

Jack-I think I broke that promise?

Jack's dad- well who do you like?

Jack-( takes a deep breath) kim

Jack's dad- hey is she one of your best friends?

Jack-that's her

Jack's dad- well she is a beautiful girl I can see why you like her:)

Jack-not only that but she's different from all the other girls that I met and aslo she's kinda like me?

Jack's dad- how is she like you?

Jack-we both are a blackbelt and the only blackbelts in the dojo,we both love to skate, we both are loyal and honest to our friends and eachother.

Jack's dad- wow she kinda sounds special. and I need to tell you something important.....

Jack-I'm listening

Jack's dad-look I remember my first girl that I liked and that girl was you mother and its just like you and kim.your mother and I have so much in common but I remember this moment when I was at her brothers 18th birthday party and out of all the guys she chose me and we slow dance and were one centimeter away from my first kiss and that's when I fell in love with her so I knew I had to let it out and now look at it now I got married and had you and a wonderful life.

Jack-wow dad thanks but I also miss mom :(

Jack's dad - hey do you want to see something cool?

Jack- sure ( softly)

Jack's dad- do you see all the stars out on this glorious  night

Jack- yeah

Jack's dad- that star is your mother

Jack- really

Jack's dad- yeah. I sometimes come out and talk to her.

Jack's dad- well im going to bed are you coming?

Jack-nah im just gonna look at the stars

jack's dad left and jack is staring out to the stars

next day

jack walks into the dojo

Jack- hey rudy

Rudy-oh hey jack

Jackdo you know where kim is?

Rudy- why???? do you need to talk to her?

Jack- yes I do

Rudy-did kim tell you

Jack- tell me what?

Rudy-so she didn't

Jack- tell me what?

Rudy- ( takes a deep breath) kim just told me 30 mins ago that she is moving to Alaska to live with her dad and she said it's permanent

Jack- WHAT?!?!

Jack- where is she now?!?!

Rudy-she went to the airport 15 mins ago her flight isn't until 3

Jack- ( looks at his watch) 2;30 pm

Rudy- oh and I forgot she wanted me to give you this ( pulls out a letter from hit the road jack)

jack takes the letter

Rudy-I can drive you up there

Jack-no if you drive me up there then I will be too late

jack runs to his locker and grabs the letter he kept from hit the road jack

Rudy- are you gonna call a cab?

Jack- no but im gonna rum

Rudy- WHAT!!!!!

Jack-I have too it the only way I can reach kim

Rudy-but thats miles and miles and miles....

Jack- ( cuts off rudy) of traffic but if I can run through traffic maybe I can find kim in the airport

Rudy- I have one thing to say..... good luck

jack smiles and runs out the door

jack runs past the mall and on the street. as he is on the street he sees miles of traffic and a police stops him

Jack- officer please you have to let me go ( in a pleading way)

Officer-sorry you were running through traffic I need your information. whats your name son.

Jack- jack brewer

Officer- and one last thing? why are you running through traffic?

Jack- because I have to let a friend know something efore she flies to Alaska

Officer-oh so your not going to see blake shelton in concert?

Jack-no sir and blake shelton is here?

Officer-so your not going to the concert your going to the airport?

Jack- yes sir

then jack runs off and runs out of traffic

then jack reaches the airport

jack reaches the airport and runs through people then he found kim entering the plane and he followsher. kim already sat in the plane and jack enters in

Kim-JACK!?!? (stamd up)

Jack- kim I need to tell you something

Employe- sir do you have a ticket?

Jack-no mam I don't but I need to

Employe- ( cuts off jack) then get out of this plane!!!!!

Jack-mam im not going to Alaska I need to tell her something it will be quick

Employe-ok fime but you only get 5 mins thats all !!!!

Jack-great cuz that's all I need

employe walks away

Jack-kim rudy told me everything and i understand but kim there is a part of me that keeps going through my mind and im gonna tell you right now. ( takes a deep breath) when we first met I catched your apple and I thought to myself is this girl like the others. Then a few days ago when we were friends I thought maybe she's different then few weeks of being she is different from others and that's what i like about you so far.2nd year of being friends when we hugged at the tournament you know the one i almost went to Japan i felt like i didn't want to let you go and that's when I sprout deelings for you but im still confused if i liked you the whole time? Then Hollywood came to us and at the beginning ifelt nervous but after we've gone through i felt confident around you that i wanted to kiss you at the top of the Hollywood sign but the directer erupted us.Then the prince came into town and when i asked you for a dance with you and im telling you the truth. I don't like to slow dance with sombody but when im with you it's actually fun to dance with sombody who's special. last but not least yesturday kim that canoe trip i cant stop thinking about it but i think that im falling for you. that day was so special that i want to relive it with you. The point im saying is I really like you alot  actually. one last thing to say if you fly away im never going to forgive myself for this.

Kim-look jack i dont want to leave you guys its just i haven't seen my dad since ever and it's been so long that i dont know what he looks like. I'm gonna miss the dojo,my friends,my mom, and you

Jack-so your not staying

Kim-im afraid not

Jack- if your not staying then here I want you to read this ( hands her the letter from hit the road jack)

kim takes it

Jack-I haven't read yours yet but I will

kim smiles then it fades

Kim- well I guuess this is goodbye

Jack- hey hey hey  lets don't say goodbye lets just say see you later

Kim-jack im really gonna miss you

Jack- me too

jack and kim hug like they did in hit the road jack except they don't freak out and it's alittle longer

Kim-(hugging jack) jack I want you to know if they think you weak because your on the good side then they're wrong cuz I think your amazing at everything even as a friend and also no one can replace.

jack smiles and while hugging her he kisses her head then they let go

Jack- see you later ( softly)

Kim-see you later ( softly)

jack waves goodbye to kim then exits

jack sits down in those chairs by the entrance and pull out the letter and reads it

after 15 mins of reading he puts th letter back in the envelope and walks towards the exit  until kim walks up behind him

Jack-kim what are you doing here the plane just left

Kim- I know I canceled my own flight

Jack- but what made you changed your mind?

Kim-I don't know I guess im not ready to leave seaford ( smiles at jack)

jack smiles back

Kim-oh that message you said earlier that was very sweet of you

Jack-well I just had to let out I guess

jack and kim smile at eachother then they look at eachother and jack steps towards kim and make the same move he did in the karate games and they kiss for 5 secs then they break away the kiss and they look at eachother nervously

Jack-are you ready to go home?

Kim- yeah.yeah i am

Jack- ok

Kim- do I need to call a cab?

Jack-no don't call the cab ther's traffic

Kim- then how are we supposed to get home ?

Jack-well I ran all the way here so.... do you want to walk with me?

Kim- sure ( bites her lip) and they left together to go home or i can say the dojo

thsnk you guys so much for reading this. it literally took me 2 weeks to write this and i put alot of thought into this .so if you disliked it i totally understand and also stay tuned for kims new experience.

ps.im sorry this was really long,if you wondering who i am i am the one who wrote that really long episode guess on the subsinker page 4 or 5 and one last thing to say please and PLEASE comment below thank you guys so much.