Talk:Oh, Christmas Nuts/@comment-90.213.216.200-20121124110858

oookay i thought i have a shot ? at the script you know making a short piece of my own kick moment here it goes and please can u tell me what i could improve and if it is good or not thanks and it might be a little cheesy....here goes nothing...

the gang are at the mall

kim and jack are making a bear together

eddie jerry and milton are chatting

jerry:hey i might know a lot of things but dont you ever think that jack and kim or more than just bestfriends

milton:what like boyfriend and girlfriend

jerry:yea

eddie:kepp talking

milton:then why havent they kissed

eddie:maybe because were always in the way or something happens

milton:we do no such thing

they all have flashbacks for when they interupt or when something happens

eddie and jerry raise their eyebrows

milton:okay maybe we do

edie:so what do we do

milton:i think i have an idea

jerry:does it involve me?

milton: yes jerry it does

later on jack and kim walk out of the shop with a bear

milton whispers get into position

eddie runs and bumps into jerry spilling sauce all over him just a few centimetres away from a mistletoe so that when jack and kim come they will be underneath the mistletoe

jack and kim see them in amazement and run over exactly underneath the mistletoe

as they get there jerry and eddie get up and say merry chrristmas

kim and jack look at eachother confused

kim:its not even christmas yet what do u mean

jerry:says aww what a couple

eddie:look up

kim and jack look up and say oh

when they are about to say hey! jerry and eddie are gone and they see them runing away in the distance

kim:well should we

jack:well we might be

kim;going over board

jack:i dunno

kim:so...

kim:i just think that we should

jack:kill them?

kim:no.. im thinking that we should

jack suddenly kisses her stopping her at her last words

jack:merry christmas

kim smiles

randy and frank are together and see kim and jack together

randy: but you were suppose to kiss me i have always had a crush on u

kim:u have...

rany:no... what are u talking about

frank:oh you have gone to far kim is mine

then they do their fight while jack says u probably shouldnt have done that?

frank is on the floor and says well since ure dating u should know that kim went out with me?

kim:yea 7 years ago get over ureself u broke up with me and i got on with my life and apparently your gonna be in 7th grade for a long time

jack:what?? you went out with hime

kim:trust me long story u dont wanna know?

jack:its okay i mean we love eachoher and can never apart

kim smiles with joy

jack:cmon ive got a little present for u

kim:okay and giggles

as they walk off frank looks at them angrily

jerry and eddie and milton come up and laugh as frank gets up they run away

frank takes one glance back with an angry look then leaves?

to be continued....

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