Talk:Kick/@comment-3445935-20120803161003

has anyone ever got a review fronm question42

she/he said this in my girl vs monster fanfiction

Entries not allowed: 1. Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc. 2. One or two liners. 3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story. 4. Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc. 5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc. 6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.

Because your story is about the actors Leo and Oliva, not the characters they play, your story breaks rule #4. If you change it to be about the characters, your story will no longer break the rules.

I also think that the bolding when the characters speak is distracting. Quotations marks are enough.

Question42 Fanfiction Renaissance

Fanfiction is suppose to unleash our inmagination what the heck really pissed oops angry now

-Anima