Talk:Kick/@comment-11515251-20130721023905

Kickin it fanfic! Surprise Date! (Second part)

The next day, Jack is at the courtyard

Jack places a piece of paper on a table, then hides

Kim walks onto the courtyard, over to the table, then reads the paper

Kim: turn around...

Jack stands behind her

Kim: huh? (Turns around, sees Jack)

Jack: ready for our date? (Smiles)

Kim smiles then hugs Jack

Kim: (surprised) what date? (Smiles)

Jack: u'll see! (Smiles)

Jack holds Kim's hand then they walk off

Jack and Kim are at a park, having a picnic

Jack: are u enjoying the picnic? (Smiles)

Kim: it's amazing, thanks so much, Jack!

Jack: ur welcome, I just wanted to make u happy!

Kim: Jack, ur amazing, I'm always happy when I'm with u!

Kim hugs Jack

Rudy and Jerry are in the dojo

Bobby and Milton enter

Bobby: ready Rudy?

Rudy: the question is are u...ready?

Bobby: yes...

Rudy: oh...well, then...we are too!

Jerry and Milton step onto the mat

They start to fight, in a girly way, then both fall over

Rudy: stop! Stop! Stop! Have we taught u nothing!?

Jerry and Milton: ya!

Milton: all we did was watch tv!

Jerry: and all we did was chase after girls!

Bobby: fine! Then Rudy and I will fight!

Bobby and Rudy step onto the mat

They start fighting

Bobby kicks Rudy while Rudy kicks Bobby, they both fall over

Kim and Jack are still at the park

Kim: Jack, this date is...perfect (smiles)

Jack: not yet...(smiles and takes out a flower)

Jack hands the flower to Kim

Kim: it's beautiful (smiles)

A butterfly lands on the flower, Jack and Kim stare at it

They look into each others eyes, then Kiss

Kim: u were right, this is something special that I will never forget! (Smiles then bites her lip)

(Later) Jack and Kim walk onto the courtyard

Kim: I had so much fun, thanks Jack! But why didn't u just ask me on a date?

Jack: because...I wanted us to have our first kiss and I wanted to make it very special! (Smiles)

Kim: it was! (Smiles back)

Jack and Kim hear yelling from the dojo, then run inside

Jack: what are u guys doing!?

Bobby: we are trying to figure out who is better! And it's obviously me!

Rudy yells at Bobby again

Kim: uh, Jack and I can beat u both!

Bobby: oh ya!?

Rudy: bring it!

The four of them walk onto the mat

Jack and Kim work together to bring down Bobby and Rudy

Jack and Kim high five each other, then giggle and smile

The End!

So, what do u think!?