Talk:Kick/@comment-123.166.58.152-20120804003625/@comment-4987284-20120804123324

- make sure you put a lot of suspence in your stories.

- dont try to copy another story.

- try to add very little detailes that add up to what you want to do with thw story.

- come up with a very interesting name and summery to catch peoples eye.

- make your story original and something not many people have done before

i hope this helps!