Talk:Kick/@comment-5951725-20131008023835

guys I usally don't write stories but I just wanted to help this girl out and I had fun. I really want you guys to see what we wrote so far.

http://merteens.wikia.com/wiki/The_Mer_in_Mermaid

Its fiction and my first story.

Please give me feedback.

Yeah Please Please read

I really want to know how I did.