Talk:Kick/@comment-4887878-20120916213838

Hey guys! So one of my homework was to write a memoir for my language arts class about a moment when I was scared. This is what I came up with, tell me if you like it! It has to be super short because my teacher said it can only be 3 pages (nothing more, nothing less) double spaced so yeah, I was incredibly frustrated because I wanted to keep on writing. -_- And I had to keep limiting the detail I put into it.

My Second/First Year

My eyes snapped open and a smile spread across my face. Today was Monday, the first day of seventh grade in my new school!

The thought of starting fresh was exuberating.

As I got dressed and went through my morning rituals, I thought about the year that lied ahead. Hopefully it would be enjoyable, and memorable. My Mom asked me, "Estas Lista?", I nodded, grabbed my bookbag and walked out the door.

As soon as my Mom drove off I was left staring at the chaotic mess of students. Hesitantly, I walked towards the direction of my homeroom. I noticeably winced as I heard friends squealing in joy as they reunited. I desperately wished to see a familiar face, but I knew that wasn't the case. I found my homeroom and peered through the window.I released a breath I didnt know I was holding as I noticed the classroom held only two students. Relief flooded through me as I concluded I couldn't attract any attention by being late because I was early. Minutes later I was sitting in a seat and held my breath as the doors opened. The noise level instantly increased. In an instant, my heart sped up as I noticed they were all friends.

"Attendance!" the teacher called, and the noise level dropped to whisp ers. "Jennifer _", "Here", I responded quietly, my face going red knowing all eyes were on me. I sat stiffly, fighting the urge to turn around and glare at them. Havent they ever seen a new student before? "Hey, what's your schedule?", shock flooded through me. I turned swiftly handing the girl my schedule. She frowned, and I realized we had no classes together. I was disappointed, but decided against showing it. The girl and her friend offered to walk me to my next class and I accepted cheerfully.

As I was left alone in front of my class, my body immediately tensed. My smile dropped, my cheerful mood vaporized, as I stared at a sea of new faces.

21:38, September 16, 2012 (UTC)Jenny56852 (talk)

THE END YAY! Not really lol. I wanted to keep going b/c as you can clearly tell that was some ending and I wanted to show her what else happened. I'm probably gonna fail b/c I didnt really say what happened... Anyway, tell me if you find any grammar problems. I'll most likley have to write it again b/c I just realized I was supposed to include vocabulary words. -___- Goodness gracious...